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A kiss is a promise, easily broken.
A hug is a lie, always unspoken.
A touch is fragile, so quickly taken.
A smile is elusive, so soon forsaken.

A friend is a person who betrays you slowly.
A lover is a person who treats you as lowly.
An equal is a person who doesn’t exist.
A mentor is someone better than this.

A life is brittle, unfairly crushed.
A funeral is a rite, so long untouched.
A death is a milestone, so often passed.
A life is something that can never last.

So take the promises even if they break.
Hold onto illusions despite that they’re fake.
Remember betrayal because before it was trust.
Remember the touches that lead into lust.

Love the lies that made you feel loved.
Hold to your place despite who’s above.
Follow the rites though they end only in pain.
Remember what you’ve lost for you’ve so much to gain.

Always remember the first sincere kiss.
Remember the truths that lead to it.
Remember the person you shared it with.
Remember the love that succeeded it.

Keep the memories that hurt you.
Hold onto the ones that cause pain.
Remember every broken heart.
In the end only memories remain.
©2006-2009 ~Inu-Girl-Kagome
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Author's Comments

I've read that "What This Kiss Means!" thing WAY too much XD

[Edit] Finally! Another poem that I've finally fixed. I HATED the ending before, lol But now I like it. Woo! [/Edit]

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:icongeckopix:
i like teh rythm of it, and its totally representing my feelings this morning...
:iconinu-girl-kagome:
Aw, thanks. Having a bad day?:(

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"While you were sleeping I figured out everything,
I was constructed for you, and you were molded for me."

"Oh sheesh, y'all! 'Twas a dream."

//

Go buy shit.
:iconmorbispsyche:
This is really good, perhaps I should start entering more of my poems, then we can talk more about them...together not to myself lol. Ok well I gtg I got lots to do before the college meeting thingy lol.
Morbis Psyche

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These Scars Tell Stories, Stories my heart doesnt want to remember.~Me
Its As Plain As Anyone Can See, We are Simply Meant to Be!~Jack Skellington
"It is not by wrath that one kills, but by laughter...' ~Friedrich Nietzsche
:iconxheartxofxicex:
It's beautiful... I love it

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°*•:*:•.¤ The make up isn’t just to hide what's on the outside, it's to cover up the insecurities I hold on the inside ¤.•:*:•*°
:iconinu-girl-kagome:
lol Thanks. Yeah, sure, if you submit some I'll take a look. I like discussing poetry and writing ^____^

--
"While you were sleeping I figured out everything,
I was constructed for you, and you were molded for me."

"Oh sheesh, y'all! 'Twas a dream."

//

Go buy shit.
:iconinu-girl-kagome:
Thanks! And thanks very much for the fave ^____^

--
"While you were sleeping I figured out everything,
I was constructed for you, and you were molded for me."

"Oh sheesh, y'all! 'Twas a dream."

//

Go buy shit.
:iconcandysores:
Aww, this is amazing! :+fav:

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candysores©
Deviously sweet!
:star-empty:
SRG|Commission Me!
:iconvictoriaharte:
I love this, it is one of those poems at first glance some might call a depressed outlook at life, but looking into the depths of it, its actually a beautiful sentiment, the flow works well and the ending is just right. Nicely done :+fav:

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I imagine a world where the raindrops
Are tears from the angels crying
Tears falling from joyful laughter
The breeze their gentle sighing
:iconmorbispsyche:
k thnks for the comment
Josh

--
These Scars Tell Stories, Stories my heart doesnt want to remember.~Me
Its As Plain As Anyone Can See, We are Simply Meant to Be!~Jack Skellington
"It is not by wrath that one kills, but by laughter...' ~Friedrich Nietzsche
:iconmizutsu:
Wow, that was really amazing. It makes me feel good when I read that, it really has a lot to teach about life ^_^.

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