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Maybe if I’m normal, he’ll love me.
Maybe if I’m happier, he’ll love me.
Maybe if I smile.
Maybe if I laugh.
Maybe if I change.
Maybe.
Maybe he’ll love me.
Maybe I’ll hate myself.
But I already do.
Maybe it won’t matter,
If he loves me.
©2008-2009 ~Inu-Girl-Kagome
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Author's Comments

Got the idea randomly. I'm in a Creative Writing class and doing the exercises for it make me want to try new styles. This isn't technically a style, it's just not what I normally write.

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:iconemz-chan:
So perfect. My feelings exactly at the moment.

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:iconinu-girl-kagome:
Thanks, and thanks for the fave =) Need to talk? Note me if you want.

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"While you were sleeping I figured out everything,
I was constructed for you, and you were molded for me."

"Oh sheesh, y'all! 'Twas a dream."

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:iconemz-chan:
aww, doll. You are too sweet. Thank you. :hug:

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Queen Of Fucking Everything.

MY NEW ACCOUNT
:iconinu-girl-kagome:
Aw, any time :hug: =)

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"While you were sleeping I figured out everything,
I was constructed for you, and you were molded for me."

"Oh sheesh, y'all! 'Twas a dream."

//

Go buy shit.
:icontonsatz:
its repetitive, but i think i like that about it. should be a chorus for a song or something :)
ps.. want to write songs?

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It's Business Time Baby!
:iconinu-girl-kagome:
Thanks =) It's kind of about a constant worry kinda thing, so repetition hopefully works with it, lol

And P.S., yes =D

--
"While you were sleeping I figured out everything,
I was constructed for you, and you were molded for me."

"Oh sheesh, y'all! 'Twas a dream."

//

Go buy shit.
:icontonsatz:
yay!!! you should come over sometime then :)

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It's Business Time Baby!
:iconinu-girl-kagome:
That'd be awesome =) Maybe during reading week, then?

--
"While you were sleeping I figured out everything,
I was constructed for you, and you were molded for me."

"Oh sheesh, y'all! 'Twas a dream."

//

Go buy shit.
:icontonsatz:
sure, that'd be great!! ill get u my number on friday :)

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It's Business Time Baby!

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